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This is really a descriptive story. I read it over and over, trying to puzzle out what the place is, what it is meant to contain, whether it’s really just human prisoners or something immeasurably worse.

Well done.

Outstanding.

Thanks for all the feedback, guys! This was a really inspired story and I’m currently toying of whether or not to continue it.

What a puzzle! What is this tomb? I would definitely continue this, simply because I’m fascinated with this place you’ve created. I would like to see more.

What a puzzle! What is this tomb? I would definitely continue this, simply because I’m fascinated with this place you’ve created. I would like to see more.

It’s a very nice, almost literal, perception of the challenge. It’s a good entry.

Always enjoy your writing, my friend. You’re a natural with science fiction environments. :)

I enjoy your literal take on the challenge. It is very unique.

Nice. Even something as subtle as the capitalisation of “Tomb” helps hint that something weird is amiss, and the rest of the piece has enough varied description to keep the pacing strong.

Very powerful, and I didn’t expect the end. I love this story!