Well congrats on making me feel ill from having so many cliches crammed down my throat!

Never again do I think I’ll be able to call poetry unoriginal, overly sentimental, contrived and cloying and mean it as a compliment… A strong balance of wheedling and vaguely nonsensical – MH :)

Never before has such horrible comment been a compliment to me :)

A sonnet in the Shakespearean form to boot! Nicely done, although I am finding that I need to reread several lines in order to work out how the meter is intended to flow.

I want to throw up all over this…which is a good thing for this challenge. I appreciate the Shakespearean form you’ve used. Also the nauseating expressions are so over done that they seem kind of shallow, which ties in well with the whole bad poetry aspect.

Good job. This is great.

haha, some of these comments are brutal… and I agree with them… BUT it WAS intended to be bad so I’m torn between either saying this is a great addition or this is absolutely wretched!— and because of that— you probably stayed true to the challenge more so than any other entry… and I already know you’ve got a fantastic knack for writing originally and very well… so, all things considered, the ‘this is great’ side ultimately wins! It’s great how bad you made it, uhhlm, if you get what I’m saying haha

Really well executed, and to quote Dan Ackroyd on SNL, truly bad.