You got me hooked, waiting for a sequel with great interest, I like premise and the characters are good too, nice job…

I like it. It reminds me of the Matrix. So many questions that the characters take for granted, that’s the mark of a good world. And by good I mean there is a feeling of depth. Good work and nice to see you back.

Very strong – you set your scene without any kind of fuss, and, though I got the ending before I got there, it was a well-written, suspenseful climax…

I agree with Robert – it’s good to have you back – you occupy a niche which no-one else quite emulates here! MH :)

Wow! I was going to be disappointed that this isn’t a complete story, but you do such a good job of pushing everyone’s writery buttons that I just end up smiling. Very well written!

That’s a great little alternate-history story. Just enough detail to get you wondering, and one hell of a “hook” at the end.

Thanks for the comments, guys, and I’m glad you enjoyed it! I certainly had fun writing it. :)