oh, snap, that is a terrible twist! dark. a little comical in the off-hand style of telling, to balance the horrific end. ugh. harsh. i guess that would make him a scrooge for life..

Haha! That is so darkly funny I want to slap myself. “I saw mommy kissing Santa Claus!” Oh, it made my day.
Funny how within the challenge only one of the entrants is a hot steamy love affair like the challenger asked for.
That’s what I love about challenges, and about this.
The romantic part is in the language up front, the darker story is the real twist and it’s STUNNING.