Dang. Creepy.

And sorta romantic.

But mostly creepy.

You have a knack for telling a complete story within the limit here. I love your style of writing, it comes off as economical but not spartan.

The best part here, for me, is the sense of the wild indoors. There are walls, a corner, a floor, but with bushes and padding paws. It’s a subtle contrast. Also, the apparent betrayal at the end surprised me, and I always appreciate someone who can actually catch me off guard.

licks your eyeball