Nice. A bit different to the other entries, and what you’ve done works well – the voice of the critic is strong and the ending is funny as well as slightly ominous! Thanks for your participation – MH :)
Nice. A bit different to the other entries, and what you’ve done works well – the voice of the critic is strong and the ending is funny as well as slightly ominous!
Thanks for your participation – MH :)
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