haha, this is awesome! Thanks for the sequel. Posting a lot is just simply a good way to get better. This is a good place to stretch your abilities into different, unfamiliar disciplines of writing (poetry, prose, and everything else). Cuz it’s a free community— who cares if it’s bad? And btw, your meter couldn’t be ‘neater’, Robo. I liked it dude :)

Part of the reason there are not so many sequels is that there are only so many of us in the first place. Perhaps, also, sometimes a long story is intimidating – what if I introduce an inconsistency?

Oh, and if you’re really wondering how to get more sequels and attention it all comes down to being a good commenter— I find— not necessarily how awesome you are with the keyboard. ‘Good commenter’ means quality and quantity. Ficly is a two way street in that sense.

Tad: Well, then, your nose is safe. :)

nice job!
I think it may be time to enact the sequel challenge again..
Or perhaps the random story challenge, the likes of which produced a certain thumbwar series..

well…your metre could be a bit better.
(runs to a safe distance – is england far enough?)
I joke of course.
Very amusing and nice =]
Abby x
P.S Did I really comment with the word nice?!!? You know what I mean.

I like it!