Seasons, the challenge phrase, and emotion, this is a metaphoric poetic piece cleverly crafted.

There is so much here that makes me smile in remembering and makes my heart sting for all the truth.

Wow…you’re writing always makes me react like that. Very beautiful. And you’re writing about romance!!! =D

Definately deserving of all five pencils. Take any pencils you want so long as you can keeeeeep writing!
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Beautifully done. You’ve really managed to capture the wonder and pain of love with this piece.

It’s so wrenching and embittered, but written with such grace, it’s a pleasure to read.