I stand in heartfelt agreement of this poem. “Wordless weapons” really capture that intangible but very painful aspect of the relationship.

Your structure for this poem was awesome, the rythmn of it all gave it a real sense of attitude and anger, of poking someone in the chest and saying, “I’m fed up with this crap. Do something yourself for a change.”

Fantastic stuff.

Nice! It’s that epic part in a movie when the main character its finally going to stick up for themselves, finally finding their independence. I think this is great.