Commentary: This repost is for the “You Have Exactly 5 Days…” challenge. Original commentary can be found at:
http://ficly.com/stories/18470

oh so awesome. Finally, the question of where the universe came from is answered.
And of course we know that everything lurks behind the fridge.
Abby
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So that’s where chaos comes from…

I mean… undeniably overlooked and undeservingly so. This is something else… and I love it. The language is you use is imaginative and that correlates with the story line— but what’s waesome is that you present this fantastic circumstance within a mundane, real life like setting, with very believable characters and dialogue. It’s hilarious and also awe-inspiring. Truly unique and wonderful, August. Thanks for reposting this in my challenge!

Wow, love it times a million. What’s great is that you underplay it, which makes it seem more important then it would be if you told us.