slice of life.

I love the line “So hell is like the gayest place on earth?” It’s great because Kevin is just patiently reciting, oblivious like a sad puppy. Aw.

Nice back and forth. I like that even though you’ve initially painted Kevin in a very negative light you allow him to soften at the end there, with Donnie not accepting it. It made for a slight reversal which felt very real.

Oh, and Slightnmighty used your story for the ‘change of view’ challenge. http://ficly.com/stories/23438

This is funny, even though I feel bad for laughing at it, because I’m sure this happens quite often. My history teacher tried to convince the class that “Queers are driving the society to malarchy, and we should follow in the Roman empire’s footsteps!” I pointed out that it was more likely to be gay that straight in that time period, and that the Roman empire eventually crumbled. The teacher who overheard the conversation from the hallway agreed with me, heheheh.

But I digress. Hilariously written, very enjoyable.