I really like how this sets the mood! Only one nitpick is that “if so.. terminate” read odd to me. I’m not sure whether that’s just me. Perhaps I would suggest: “See whether they’re hostile. If they aren’t (…) If they are…”

Funny little back and forth and feels surprisingly real despite the far-out scenario.

Oh, and way to start of Monthquel not only with a poem but with a sequel as well. Awesome work.