Interesting twist/break-down. I didn’t entirely follow who was talking when, but it is kind of late. I like the last line, really creates a stark image for the third one.

Thanks. I’ve made a small edit to see if it reads a bit better. Lemme know what you think.

Didn’t notice any problems, so that edit seems to be a success. ooh, Val and She revealed!

Thanks for the comment! I hope you’re enjoying the story.