interesting perspective on that superhero world, nice

Uh-oh, you’re edging perilously close to my idea for a fantastic superhero bestseller. I don’t want to have to kill you.

The only thing I can think of to say is that those must be some papercuts to require actual bandages, which is borderline absurdly nitpicky. Awesome as usual.

He had a LOT of paperwork, man!

I like your moxy kid!

Really sold it with the last paragraph.

Although I was pretty much hooked from “I put on tiny aviators and wheeled around on a bike with a siren”, which is simultaneously endearing and hilarious.

I like this whole superhero thing you have going.

Aw, poor underappreciated guy. I can relate to the papercuts… who knew paper could hurt so much?

I’m no good at comments, but that was pretty much awesome. :)

Awesome story. I feel sorry for the narrator.

I do think that the normal inhabitans of SuperWorlds are ignored too often. Nice job, I like it.

Sorry, forgot to rate with my last comment. There ya go.

“Growing up, I always wanted to be a cop.”

I may be wrong here, but isn’t that a dangling participle? Maybe there should be a “when I was” in front of that. I could also be an insufferable nitpicker. That is a definite possibility.

Otherwise, this is good. It’s the sort of thing I might expect from a DC one-shot written by Neil Gaiman.

Aw, poor guy. And I pretty much agree with everything said above.

I really like this, especially the last paragraph. It’s the perfect vague ending.

The last paragraph is like the one chair in the living room turned on an angle, while the sofa is parallel. It’s not a bad thing, its a nice juxtaposition, but it is counter to the established flow and kinda sticks out. It has a dry humor that the rest of the piece does not. And like furniture placement, is subject to opinion. :P I’d give you 4 1/2 pencils, but I can’t!

Owy. Paper cuts I know them well considering one of my hobbies is origami. Great story

Haha
Very good!

Great story, I loved it!