That was really, really twisted. I mean, she didn’t just kill the lamb, she tortured it, swore at it, then killed it, then cleaned up like her dress was more important. Chillingly told and really makes Mary out to be a sociopath.

Gruesome end for the little lamb – I guess being followed everywhere by a lamb would leave some people a little loopy. I liked the line at the end about keeping her dress clean, it made the portrayal of Mary even more creepy.

Wow, I love it. Great pacing and it’s rhyme isn’t sing-songy.
Only think I might think about is omitting new in the last line. I though it broke the flow a little bit.