Comments on Pull to Leap by THX 0477

ElshaHawk (LoA)

Though I don’t know what story you switched the POV of, you surely knocked my entry out of the water.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
THX 0477

Here is the link to the story upon which this is based. I would have put it up sooner, but I had to strap someone to a bed…oh wait, that doesn’t sound good.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
ElshaHawk (LoA)

not any way you interpret that!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
JC Tovil

I LOVE IT. It definitely adds a disturbing and conniving twist to my sweet, little Renee, but it’s great.
Good luck in your challenge!
And wow… it was really hard to type all that while strapped to this bed!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Robotech_Master

Sorry, THX, where is the link? I see you say here is the link, but I don’t see any actual URL.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
THX 0477

Oops!

The story is ‘Jumpin for Love’ by JC Tovil.

http://ficly.com/stories/22921
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Amaris Wolfe

Holy cow! That was such an amazing interpretation of the initially sweet puppy love piece. Great job!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
cthulhuburger

I agree with Amaris Wolfe. I like how you took a sweet story and twisted it.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
RoseTone ~LoA~

Calculating, manipulative, diabolical.

Someone will need a priest in about 5 years….
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Eve

NICE. Boy, does the point of view change! What a twisted little girl you’ve made her into!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Jae

I wonder how many relationships are actually like this.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Slightnmighty

“Her own voice cooed, a melodious echo.” It conjures dissonant lullabies. Shivers!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

Her own voice cooed, a melodious echo…wow thats poetry man, pure poetry.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5