Sequel and point of view change of Robert Quick’s ‘Dare the Forest, Tread the Dark, Defy the King’
http://ficly.com/stories/22372

Nice dilemma there at the end. It really makes me curious just what is doing the stalking! That sentence near the beginning that starts, “One was speaking…” could use maybe a comma or to be broken up; I just had to reread it a time or two. Fun stuff, even if I resent the Boy Scouts being potential victims just a little.

done! and thanks.. though no one said they were boy scouts.. O.o

Very nice. Feels primal and otherworldly. I like the the combination of cold reason and instinct in the hunter’s last sentence. What else is out there that goes bump in the night? Thank you for choosing one of mine, especially that one. I was proud of that story and sad that no one had read it.