Punked is going to be a game changer in terms of mood and feeling and all of that. Working it into the poem at this point will take some artfulness— I’m totally up for the challenge it presents though! Such is just the obstacle of coming up with a list of words before thinking about story or structure.
Oh, I see. Took me a bit to catch on. It’s not different poems just documenting the poetic process. Ambitious and kind of art in itself, in the process.
Tad Winslow
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Tad Winslow