This is good, really good. Emotional. Suspenseful. I’m holding my breath for the results!
I have both a prequal AND a sequel in mind. I will get working on something good.

Ah, mysterious medical results and a nervous woman. Possibilities abound. Nice job staying within the moment to build the suspense. Let’s hope JC can rise to the occassion!

No pressure I’m sure ;)

Flows seamlessly. Well done.