haha! This is excellent… mine is just a rumbling ramble of things I wrote quickly so that I could go back over it later… but this is already exquisite! I love how you made punked steampunked— very clever :) and also the alliteration of metal mosiac, and really just the whole thing is cool simply cuz I can see where your creative mind kicked into gear and took this poem somewhere I’d probably never take it myself. I appreciate this, rose.

Very nice, and I think Tad hit it that yours is more coherent than his style, which is his own style to be sure, but much more loose.

Merry Monthquel!

Thanks!

Yeah…. I like steampunk… XP

When I read the verklepmt/stumped/debunked part, I wanted to catch a Not This/Not that/But this, in terms of a puzzle or something…

Glad you liked it!