whoa, way to take this and spin it and mix it with so much potential for a long story!

I agree with Elsha, though a moment of brightness does not a happy story make. Despite this (which is as good as your continuation in the other direction, I might add) I expect a lot of pain and suffering in her future. Though I expect that will be up to whoever else picks up the thread…

Definitely a twist from where Robert had it going, which very nicely demonstrates the beauty of the cooperative sequel. No one knows where things can go or wind up!

Definitely an interesting direction to this tale. I’m curious as to where it’s going next.

I love that St. Isidore is the patron saint of the internet. Well played, sir.