This is great. The only thing I don’t quite understand is the ’ before certain lines. Maybe I’m just stupid, but it doesn’t seem nessecary.
Love the line: ’And every footstep you take/has flooded with the air you make.

thanks mk!

i just added them quotation marks to make sure people know its someone else speaking.

great job! I love the number 22. And I love these two characters.

thanks, elsha!