since this was a repost, i changed it. Still not thinking it fits the challenge, seems to need to be more dialogue and description..

Not quite what I was looking for— however, this is really well written. Thanks for the entry. Is it spelled trollup? I thought it was trollop. Anyway. The first one was closer to what I wanted.

yeah, I was in a bind, can’t delete challenge entries.. and I don’t like either one for the requirements!