Sometimes I try to write clever, and sometimes I try to write good…sometimes I achieve neither…but my muses make me write anyway…god I hate my muses.

Awwww don’t beat yourself up for it. I think this is an interesting way to take the story. Sure it wasn’t the way I was meaning for it to go but that doesn’t mean it can’t be fun to explore. You’ve created a split in the universes (and one that is more fun to think about that real world slut-tagging) all thanks to your muses. (Lucky, I only have one. Or maybe it’s like wives, more than one equals trouble?) Anyway I think you did a good job.

A. I seriously own a BMF wallet. Bought it midway through the semester because my old one crapped out on me.

B. I just got done watching Inglourious Basterds a couple of hours ago.

C. Nice and unexpected take on the thread!

D. That repetition of the paragraph from the preceding story is just hilarious. I don’t know if it’s meant to be, but it just works.

A funny redux on the reality of the piece, perhaps even a bit of a dig at the style of the last bit. I think it gets the same feedback as the previous piece, that it’s such a jarring switch it would be irritating if I was reading one linear piece. It’s excusable cause of the whole cooperative creativity thing, but not really smooth. A good joke on the material perhaps, but not high art, not that I think you were really going for that.

As the flames go up the Shondells play in the background.