Not exactly the pinnacle of good writing.
It’s choppy and not very descriptive, but I enjoyed writing it.

Awesome! I loved it. I was struck with the urge to write a prequel or sequel, but that would probably be difficult without straying into somewhat controversial religious territory :D

Thanks ^_
And I think I’ve already tread onto the controversial religious territory with my “Interviews with a pessimistic atheist”.
Is that bad? XD