I liked this is had a sing song quality that was a nice contrast to the subject matter.
@at the age comment on the profile, One of my favorite writers of all time is eliz davis aka mask by the moon and she first won my adoration at twelve years old. So yeah if we knew you were preteen we might hold you to the standard of a creative genius high on the intoxication of youth.

It’s not just being a preteen that might affect your judgement.
And just for the record, I’m not 12.