nice! of course the person is a vamp, and can’t have any witnesses. :)

I was thinking more that the vamp was going to try and turn the protagonist. “To survive the process is difficult enough. The will to live is crucial” and all that. :) Of course, the next writer can decide that. And whether or not the attempt succeeds.

Brilliant. I got the “let’s try to turn you!” bit right away. Not sure I’ll have time to do a sequel in the next few days (law school just started back up) but if nobody else jumps on it, I’ll be there.

How hypocritical would it be if she accepted, lol.

Great turn and balance between action and dialogue. The exposition is very nicely wrapped up in the dialogue so it’s intriguing instead of heavy-handed. I like, yes I do.

Great continuation, and you picked right up on what I was going for with my bit. Too cool. Thanks for playing along and Merry Monthquel!

I had originally imagined a male villain, but I think the female villain does add several different layers to it.