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Comments on H.T.W. (edited and stripped down to self conscious ripples) by Tad Winslow

Tad Winslow

much better
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
THX 0477

Very angry. Comes across initially as strident and indifferent, but there is a hurt underneath.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Abstract

I like the quirky meter, and the subtle enhancements it makes to the overall mood of the poem.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5