I love the bit about him hiding the A he got. So he’s a bad boy…this could take a couple different turns. I kinda hope she doesn’t go for him, but it would be interesting to see the outcome if she did.

This is a nice series. I’ll keep reading!

First two lines are brilliant. Excellent sequel. Plan on continuing?

I think you meant “His eyes” in the 4th paragraph.

fixed! thanks!

I’m not sure what to do next, i mean, there’re obvious high school events that can be thrown in their path, and I haven’t decided if she gets him or not.

first comment in a while, all for you elsha =). i throughly enjoy this, really reminds me of highschool, u painted that picture very well

I love the nievity of the protagonist, but the sharpness with which she analyzes. Definitely brings back memories. The smoldering eyes are the worst/best! Very well written!

there is no way she gets him what would she do with him once she got him. Change him? never. she better just stay put before she is the one who changes. wait i got a bit caught up in that, i smoked in my car in high school,dang freud was right. curse you again sigmond.
Oh yeah nice story.

you don’t want her to change??