Vivid word use – very descriptive, lots of impact.

The last line is good. It conveys motivation beyond a response to bullying – he feels this is the only difference he can make, but he’s sure as hell going to make it.

Very anti-heroish. You should sequel this – or someone else might… (Merry Monthquel~!)

Nice, visceral job.
Four bleeding pencils.

And I got a kick out of your title – nice job turning part of a cheesy phrase from a BAAAAAD fanfic into a statement to get tattooed on your arm.

Bleeding pencils? You’re hilarious. Thanks for the comments!

Really good ficly, and I especially like the bit about physics having fun painting the walls.