I think I’m going to print this out and memorize it. If this is what your “experimentation” with dialogue looks like…. great job! Wow.

The pacing, the well placed descriptions – all of it provides a hilarious picture without slowing the action down.

I have to say…. when I read this, you’re playing it with Nathan Lane….

Oh my gosh! That had not even crossed my mind! You’re absolutely right though. I think just for pointing that out that I want to memorize it too.

Edit: changed Kevin to Alby, because I couldn’t help myself.

x3

OH GOODNESS. BIRDCAGE. Very funny.