Nice moment, and quite a character you’ve hinted at in that last paragraph. A little disjointed, but I think it got where you wanted it to. I like all the possibilities raised, but it does seem to violate the content of the first bit since the kid’s dad is supposed to be someone he knows.
…dang, I didn’t see that part in the last paragraph.
Unless of course we break out the epileptic trees: Suppose he was someone his kid knew, but they were separated at birth and the father had plastic surgery to conceal his identity beforehand, which was just now undone…
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