Nice spin on the situation. I like the comraderie here between the two guys. Did you see the prequel and decide to play with the spy angle as well, or was that coincidence? I thought this back and forth worked well, and I could totally see John grinning through the whole thing.
I read yours- I felt like I had to, otherwise I might screw up the continuity on accident. I almost did anyway. This is the third story that I wrote as a sequel but the others ended up not making sense as a whole, so they got scrapped. I’m glad that you liked where I went with it. Hopefully, cremies will too.
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Robert Quick