I clicked on this because I liked the name so much. By the time I got to the thumb drives I was glad I had.

And great finish.

This reminds me of something I’d see on McSweeney’s, less a story and more of a portrait via list. Looking forward to more stories from you…

Cute. It’s so non-traditional that I can’t really critique it, but at the same time that’s what sells it! Nicely done, especially with the last item on the list.

An unoriginal comment here, but the last line totally makes it.