I like it – but reading it, it feels like there should be 2 more syllables after “Unfazed”. Maybe I’m just reading it in a different cadence though. Regardless, I like how you’ve managed to convey quite a bit in so few words. Seems one sided, the friendship. And because of the speakers actions, the other won’t be able to run away without some form of repercussions. Nice.
I like it – but reading it, it feels like there should be 2 more syllables after “Unfazed”. Maybe I’m just reading it in a different cadence though.
Regardless, I like how you’ve managed to convey quite a bit in so few words.
Seems one sided, the friendship. And because of the speakers actions, the other won’t be able to run away without some form of repercussions.
Nice.
RoseTone ~LoA~