I was surprised at /why/ he hates the first killer. If that was the goal, it worked! :)
Typo: missing space at the end between “I” and “opened”

Italics are underscores eitherside mate

I thought it was funny how the main character wishes for the thief to die not because he just killed two people, but because he was going to take the guy’s money. So i guess I’m agreeing with boxofun.
Anyway, I like it so far. How you explain him discovering his power is well done. I hope somebody writes a sequel!

Not just somebody, I plan on taking the next sequel personally because I have a specific place to take this I hope nobody minds, and I’d be glad for them to jump into the chain a few stories down the line.