Wow, I love this story! I like how you literally get sucked in or should I say… I slipped into your story as I read it!! Very nice!

What a coincidence! For the past seven years, I have watched trees in the woods I live next to succumb to the same fate, either from tree hauler guys or the dicks down the road. I have nearly the same feeling as the character too. Weeeeird…
If I get some time I might take a whack at a sequel. :)

Thanks for the kind feedback :) Kihd, I’d love to read a sequel if you can get to it.

This is beautifully flowing, even if it’s sad. I like the mystery you’ve imbued and how she’s just tugged in.

The only thing I’m left wanting after reading is more of a sense of The Narrator – something easily assuaged with a sequel. The idea of a growing hole in the forest is a very cool setup.

If you stare into the abyss long enough, the abyss stares into you :D

Brilliant!

I liked it a lot! There’s a real sense of innocence and helplessness in the protagonist, and the story is intriguing. At first I thought it was all a metaphor for deforestation, but now I’m not so sure…

Only one thing I could mention: if you broke it into paragraphs, it could give the development of the story more definition. But that’s only my personal opinion.

Anyway, I look forward to seeing it develop if any sequels are on their way!