Comments on Who am I? by Kcore

Kihd

It saddens me that I couldn’t get this until the defense/sleeping line…

Does it start with a T and end with an urtle? And rhyme with hurtle? Please say yes… :B
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Kihd

By the way, check those “its”. Don’t quote me, but I think the apostrophe should come after the “s” to make it possessive. Otherwise it would be “it is”.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Kcore

You are very correct, it is our little friend the turtle. As far as the its’/it’s goes, I figured I screwed that up. I always screw that up. Thanks for catching it!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Kat Peters

Awesome, loved it! Very descriptive!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Kihd

No problem. Great story!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Spageti

It’s → its.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.