That was a lovely moment. For all the magical aspects, the interaction could have just as easily been about a cat or a dog for the aged family member. Nice job using fantasy elements to tell a ‘real’ human story.

Very sweet! I really connected with the characters, all the while describing the “magnificent” beast. Nice!

That was a very evocative text. Not mentioning its identity and using circumlocution made it, in my opinion at least, more effective than actually outright stating what it was.

Very nice! I was not expecting something so fantastical and I think you wove it in very believably, and with so much emotion!

Beautiful text!

I love it! Very well done.

It reminded me of the story of the blind men and the elephant. The blind men thought that the elephant was made up of many different animals; the blind man’s touch reveals that the many different animal parts (wings, scales, legs) are actually all from the same creature.

Fantastic! I want a pet like this.