That was great. Gotta love a good Jager reference. I like that it’s part a morality tale (don’t drink and text) but still winds up a happy ending.

Good story dripping with description yet not just an info dump. Harder to do than you would think.

Slight crit, 1st paragraph: …" finger as big as a house pointing towards him in it’s zeal." Its not it’s.

Good read!

Thanks for the comments! Good catch, BA, thanks!