So, like watching from a distance, like a lonely kid. It’s sad. The feeling is so clear and blue it’s affecting. I don’t think someone can read this and not feel sad.

Somehow, though, the fact that there are no full stops or commas or lower punctuation, but capital letters at the start of each line detracts from the simplicity.That may just be me, though.

I hadn’t thought of that at all. You make a valid point. Proper punctuation added :)