As an opening its good. We get setting and information to where the story may lead.

But I’m always suspicious when the word “was” is used over and over as a substitute for a descriptive or in the same sentence.

“cloth that was as filthy as it was ragged.”
Alt: cloth, filthy as it was ragged.

I liked this line but thought it could be rearranged for punch and save you a few characters in the bargain:
“Colder than a moneylender’s soul, Sirach.”

Slightly adjusted. I will be revamping this series in accordance with Tina’s suggestions and whatever skills I honed over the last year.