Um, maybe mark as mature :p

This story was…interesting :) I liked it!

Wow. I think she should be more worried! Typical teenager under-response.
The structure annoys me (and there’s no full stop at the end!!) but I like the actually story. Nice one :)

Reading this makes me very glad texting wasn’t around when I was a teenager. That sounded really old.

Anyway, good pacing although a might frantic. The hyper paragraphing didn’t seem to help any other than making it a might confusing.

Perfectly voiced story in my opinion.

@Luke Nicolaou: I DID mark it as mature XD