Whoa, brutal. I liked the shift from the crazy, intangible psychic world to the harsh reality, not to mention the smooth linking of the two via the thrown lie “spear” and the fired bullet.
WAH. I don’t think I’m in love with the first paragraph, but the REST. I’m just… speechless. This is awesome. You know when I started reading the second paragraph I was thinking to myself “This can’t be that easy.” Then I go to its end. Hha, you sly telepath.
WAH.
I don’t think I’m in love with the first paragraph, but the REST. I’m just… speechless.
This is awesome. You know when I started reading the second paragraph I was thinking to myself “This can’t be that easy.” Then I go to its end.
Hha, you sly telepath.
Aahh, that’s too bad. []o( I kinda liked that ol’ Martin guy. Oh, well. I’ll keep reading…
Aahh, that’s too bad. []o( I kinda liked that ol’ Martin guy. Oh, well.
I’ll keep reading…
I too liked martin, a lot. Is Disembarkation really a word?
THX 0477
J. Rein B.
Sir Bic
Over the Precipice of the Unknown; Into the Frontier of Uncertainty