Comments on Seeking Profound Sequences by Kat Peters

Kat Peters

My brain wasn’t really functioning this morning, let me know if I repeated any words please. Thanks.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Eckhouse

I don’t think so, so well done there. It’s very poetic with a nice lyrical rhythm, partly symptomatic of the challenge, I’m sure. It will be interesting to see if other entries turn out similarly. Very cool.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Kcore

Looks good, I don’t see any repeated words but a lot of times your mind just skips over them and doesn’t “see” them. Only thing I see, isn’t “without” one word, not two?
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Kat Peters

Yeah, I should have put “without” instead of breaking into two, it could have actually helped with the challenge! ;) (giving me an extra word to use, or two)
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
stargazer1960

I like it. Very creative.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Slightnmighty

Sooo beautiful with such constraints and rhythm!? Very well thought through.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Kat Peters

Thanks!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Jae

Any thought process is complicated by the requirements of the challenge. I think this one came through pretty well.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 3 out of 5