Nice twist! Makes me feel worse for Matty, though, who’s gone from “hapless friend who listens to other friend’s ranting” to “friend secretly spied on by other friend.”

And now hapless friend feeling guilty for being so passive. Great twist to the story and inventive way to use the situation in a very different way. Thanks for jumping on with a sequel!

The idea came almost immediately after reading the first three, so thanks to the both of you for the great inspiration.

Now this story is put into context. It’s always a jump to sequel and change viewpoints.

Nitpick: fourth line “and” is missing a D.