Lovely back and forth and very much in that olde Austen style. Nicely done with a conflicted, romantic man of mystery for your protagonist.
Despite the fact that most of this story is dialogue, I’m still aware of the complexity of the surroundings. I agree wholeheartedly with THX’s comment. Plans to continue, perhaps? I would sequel, but I want to know where you are taking this.
Despite the fact that most of this story is dialogue, I’m still aware of the complexity of the surroundings. I agree wholeheartedly with THX’s comment.
Plans to continue, perhaps? I would sequel, but I want to know where you are taking this.
Yes, I have a general idea of how it will continue.
THX 0477 
Jae 
memento