Excellent entry! I love the opening line.

Very dark and vaguely political. Definitely gets across a disgruntled sort of mood.

Awesome!

Wow. This is amazing

i think this is what Jemini cricket saw as teh boys turned into donkeys.. awesome!

I really enjoyed this dark view of the world…betwixt dreams.

A beautiful, unsettling poem. Lack of repetition makes it even more impressive.