i think you could clean up the last line in the first paragraph ‘as if his grasp could keep her living’ or something like that.
beautiful moment, bittersweet, agonizing, but well done.

Tears ran down his face, twin rivulets of pain and sorrow, splashing silently on the white bedsheets shrouding her once-beautiful figure.

Man I just love it. You never fail to stun. The description is flawless. I actually like the long last line of the first stanza, like a long last goodbye.

Thanks for you feedback guys! Elsha, I have edited that line to make it flow better (midnight writing is NOT recommended), and Jae, I hope that it still has the same effect that you liked!

Heartbreaking moment, exquisitely rendered.