cattery=battery.

Yay or nay on the last sentence? It seems a tad lame to me. Input?

If you don’t remember the title while reading your eyes might cross at the weirdness going on.

In other words, slam dunk.

My only crit would be that last line does seem a bit to cliche. Too Afternoon Movie Special tag liney.

Good job otherwise

I’ll have to think about how to change the last line, but it will happen eventually. Thanks for the feedback!

Even with the title I had no idea what was going on here. I think I get it, but it was just a bit too much of a leap. Maybe it’s just cause I’m not a cat person? Nicely written and all, just not enough space to build up to the weirdness with enough detail to make it sensible.

I love this.
Haha I love cats so I thought this was an adorable piece.
And Yay to the last sentence

Thanks for the feedback and ratings! I’m glad to hear that my trippy midnight writing isn’t too bad.

Cute and very imaginative. I must be a cat person, because this made sense to me.

Hehe, me likey.. :P

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Hilarious, and yeah, trippy . Congrats on the feature!

Hilarious! I love it!

I didn’t get to see the feature, but oh well! Thanks for all the helpful comments!

The, uh, “philosophy” behind this story was that phones vibrate due to cats inside of them. Based on a nightmare.

I absolutely loved this! But I don’t envy you your dreams…